100 Word Challenge Week 5

Jimmy and his family decide to take a very long hiking trip, and they walked for 3 hours straight. Suddenly, Jimmy’s mother, Karen, decided it was time to give up. Karen turned around saying she would be waiting at the bottom for Jimmy and his father. Now, only Jimmy and his father were left to continue the exhausting hike. They suddenly felt the earth rumble slightly and Jimmy’s father lost his balance and fell. This very small earthquake lasted 17 seconds. Jimmy then realized, his father was no longer responding as he hit his head. Now Jimmy realized he was left alone…

One comment

  1. betahildebrand · October 21, 2017 at 9:54 pm ·

    This sounds like the great beginning to a mysterious story. You left us hanging, however. Are you planning on continuing?